- What is the thesis for your paper?
- He worked very hard to make sure i would go to college, so that I would not have the same problems he had when I decide I want to start a family.
- List the main points you make in your paper.
- my father not graduating
- working many jobs due to not having an education
- how he thinks education is really important
- What was the most helpful advice you received from your peer evaluation?
- Two of the most helpful peer reveiw things are to not repat my self and fixing my grammer errors.
- What was the most helpful information you received in class for your paper?
- I think the most helpful informtion i receved was how to set up my outline because once i set that up I just started writing my paper with very little problems.
- How many drafts of this paper do you think you wrote and how/when did you write them? For example, did you compose at the keyboard, did you write lots of notes to yourself, did you pre-write or outline, did you write in small chunks of time or sit down and produce an entire draft at one sitting?
- Well I started off with an outline the I sat down at my computer and typed the whole thing up and i made revicements mutiple times.
- What would you do differently with this paper to make it more effectively, or what did you try to do that you just don’t think you got a good handle on?
- I feel that i did not discribe enough on the how my father feels about education.
- What are most pleased with about this paper?
- I am pleased that every one that read it liked it and i feel that i did a good job on the paper as a whole.
Monday, October 18, 2010
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Hi Clay,
ReplyDeleteI'm happy too about the description you include in Task 2. Even in Task 1, this was a strength in your writing. I'm happy to see this, because description for many writers can be a difficult task. I too struggle with it sometimes. I would say that you carefully proofread this time; although, there are still some areas, we can clean up, which we can discuss in a conference in the upcoming week.
Ms. C